Sunday, September 28, 2008

Zindagi.... Ek Saans


Zindagi....ek saans ek aas


Dhundhale ho rahe hai jo is nisha raston ke manzilon ke
Thamkar Palbhar ek nazar ji bhar dekh lene do...


Soone sa damka rahi hai jo is kore paani ko
Ek ghunt us roshani ka pi lene do...


Machalati hai jo halchal karti in leharon main
Bas ek lamha us aawaraa masti main ji lene do...



Khamosh patthar baatain karate hai jis tarah ek duje se
Unhi bolati khamoshiyon main guftugu karane do...



Hatho main bharkar dhoop liye ja rahi jo saanjh
Ek mutthi un kataron se roshan janha kar lene do...



Kya jaane kab ruk jaaye in saanson ka karawaa
Thamkar hath is pal ka ek saans main zindagi ji lene do ...

Is ek saans main puri rukakar zindagi ji lene do

6 comments:

Common Man said...

Very beautiful lines indeed. It seems that these lines are very close to my heart.

Unknown said...

nice one.....I liked it.....

mystupendoussalvation said...

sahi hai baap!! kamini itne tough hindi ke words kahan se laati hai.. see main toh hindi main bhi aadhi english mila baithi,,.. keep writing BOSS!! blog world needs u

bhavna2716 said...

@ Rajni
Shukriyaa Ma'm
@mystupendoussalvation:
Keep commentin my post need all ths gaaliyaan shaaliyaan taki kisi ki nazar naa lage..

Anonymous said...

nice thoughts abt life itna sochne ka time kaise nikal leti hai

Cosmos said...

nice one try to make more typos, but idea is great one even I am trying to live my life in one breath but....

Mast hai..
Keep it on ho sakta hai aise do teen aur padhne ke baad main bhi likhna phir se shuru kar doon..