Sahamaa huaa saa lamhaa phir vakt ki aagosh me kho gayaa
Sine me dabaa darad vakt ki lorii sunakar so gayaa
Kuchh yek boond aasuo me ghul gaye gile shikave
Aankho se nikalaa paanii bhii namakiin ho gayaa
Jaane kis ghadee me koee khataa kar baitheKi kuchh naa kah paanaa bhii kusoor ho gayaa
Bahut ki koshishe ki chhupaa jaaye jakhm
Par ghaav dab gayaa itanaa gaharaa ki sangiin ho gayaa
Sirahaane hii baithaa rahaa gamo kaa pulandaa raat bhar
Hhour hote hii vo bhii khvaabo saa kaaphoor ho gayaa
Sine me dabaa darad vakt ki lorii sunakar so gayaa
Kuchh yek boond aasuo me ghul gaye gile shikave
Aankho se nikalaa paanii bhii namakiin ho gayaa
Jaane kis ghadee me koee khataa kar baitheKi kuchh naa kah paanaa bhii kusoor ho gayaa
Bahut ki koshishe ki chhupaa jaaye jakhm
Par ghaav dab gayaa itanaa gaharaa ki sangiin ho gayaa
Sirahaane hii baithaa rahaa gamo kaa pulandaa raat bhar
Hhour hote hii vo bhii khvaabo saa kaaphoor ho gayaa
2 comments:
lines are damn good....gehrai hai kafi....
the only scope of improvement is alignment of the pic...keep it at the top so that readablity achchi ho jaye...
keep up the good work
kuch na kehna bhi guna ho gaya.. amazing line.. loved it cos its so very true...awesome pic!
maine bhi yahan aake teen poems likh di!! mumbai aur delhi likhna zaroor sikha dete hai! ;)
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