Wednesday, July 04, 2007

Jab Ham ..


Bejaan diwaroo se batiyate hai

Aur Taswiro ko hakikat banate hai

Jab ham apane ko akela pate hai


Badalo me nakshe banate hai

Aur patthro ko kahani sunate hai

Jab ham apane ko akela pate hai


Thahare pani me chap chap bajate hai

Aur bin bat yu hi gungunate hai

Jab ham apane ko akela pate hai


Chand ke piche piche jate hai

Aur tare gin gin kar bhool jate hai

Jab ham apane ko akela pate hai


Koshish karte hai chup rahane ki

Aur chuppi se ghabrate hai

Jab ham apane ko akela pate hai


Rahathe hai isi duniya me

Aur khudko dusare jaha me paate hai

Jab ham apne ko akela pate hai

6 comments:

Me Thinks.. said...

aap khudko akela kyun paate hain?
Hum mar gaye kya?

stars part and solo singing part damn nice...

Once again brilliantly writtten..

Anonymous said...

wow!!wow!!wow!!...
u capture my soul bhavna..

bahot bahot bahot sundar..although its sad..

Koshish karte hai chup rahane ki

Aur chuppi se ghabrate hai

Jab ham apane ko akela pate hai



kabhi saath mil ke kavitaayein likhenge huzoor..;)

Vicky's world said...

kya hua jo khud ko akela paate hai,

Shaksiyat to aisi hai aapki jaha khade ho jaye ek majma lagate hai,

phir kyu akele reh jate hai.....sochna zara...

jaha tak lines ki baat hai very well written but ????

bhavna2716 said...

@ MT: Aji aapke bharose hi to Zinda hai mam..

@ Dream Catcher:zaranawazi ke liye bhut bhut dhanywad...

@ Vicky's world: but what ?

delhidreams said...

mayoos takdeeron se
bejaan tadbeeron se
khud ko humraah paate hain
jab bhi hum apne ko akela paate hain

stranger............. said...

:) ham ye harkate tab hi karte hai
jab hame daar lagta hai or ham
daar ke maaare kapkapaate hai
bhagwaan ko yaad karte hai or
mammy ko bulate hai
pass baithate hai or light on karke so jahe hai
jab ham apne ko akela pate hai
:)