Wednesday, June 17, 2009


Waqt ne aisi pheri ungliya gili ret par
har lahar ke sath mera Naksh badlata raha



Komal kabhi, kabhi malin kutil sa kahi
Kadam kadam par naya saya mujhe milta raha


Ek shikhar, ek kann hun ya thokaro ki dhul mein
Nit nayi pahchaan se hi man mera ladta raha



Saaf ukarin tasviron se mil raha sagar kuch yun
Aks mera hole hole maati main khota raha



Dhun main apni madmast tha kuch yu samaa
Chode bina nishaniya meri bas aage badta chala
Bas aage badta chala









11 comments:

humbl devil said...

still in love with the sea and sand it seems...
:)

humbl devil said...

if i m not mistaken i see pain in these lines...everything alright missy?!?

Vicky's world said...

good selection of words,
par kahi koi dard sa jhalak raha hai,
hai koun si syahi jiska rag itna gehra hai,

sirf syahi main hi nahi arth bhi gehra hai

good job

bhavna2716 said...

@ Hunml devil:m always in love with S&S :), nothin much just mising Mumbaiya lyf

bhavna2716 said...

@Vicky's World:
Kuch nahi re u know how how painfull it is to write after a long tym :P

Cosmos said...

Nothing within, but something within. Nice one
First two stanza are the best ones.

Common Man said...

Naksh tera uker liya hai dil mein kuch is tarah kee sailaab bhi kam pad jayega use mitane ke liye.

humbl devil said...

aap itne shaant kyou ho??

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