Nakabo ki duniya me rahte hai ham to
Asli chehro ki pahchan hame kaha,
wo jo diwaro se jhakta hai ek mukhada,
use hi bas apna samjh bethe the,
chhune gaye to tuta bharam sara,
kis chij par hak jatane chale the,
wo to kabhi tha hi nahi hamara,
jiske sahare ham tanha chal pade the......
4 comments:
Hmmm yaar itbni bhaari or senti poems mat likha kar main dar gayi yaar, Chal if take its different nice to read it! & plz speak up! Wat u have in your mind! rest all jhakaas! na
gr8 poem in short!Keep it Up!
your use of words in poem with imotions is very nice and selection of words too. After some years you will write some lyrics.
yaar tu bahut dhasu likhti hain! this is so true.. i can relate with it.. aap tho mujhe javed akhtar ki yaad dila rahi hain! ;)
Respected Bhavna Maam,
What an excellent poem Maam, it has the power to literally drive one to tears!
Is it OK if I mention the link of your blog on my Blog page? And also if I use your poem to impress my GF ;-) ?
My blog addr is http://ganeshparab.blogspot.com.
Excellent post nevertheless.
Regards.
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