Duboyi hai kitni bar yadoo ki potali is sagar ki goud me
Har lahar phir kyo, un yadoo ke nishaan louta lati hai
Mitane ki koshish me hai jin panno ko zindagi ki kitab se
Sahil par bikhari mitti, phir kyo un lamho ko uker deti hai
Sametate hai mushkilo se apane yaha waha tute pade hisso ko
Kaise ye bas apne choone bhar se hi phir unhe bikher deti hai
Kinaaro sa sunaa mann badi mushkilo se sadhata hai chuppi
Badati hai is tarah ki sune pade taroo me sangit ched deti hai
koshisho se jami hai kabar me dabi khawaisho par waqt ki mitti
Be-raham..ye beraham lahar sari koshisho par pani pher deti hai
8 comments:
kabr par waqt ki mitti...amazing line!
tum ab bhi mumbai mein hi hona?
;)
khamosh patthar uske baad ye bedard lehrein both are so touchy and while reding it i can actually relate it with myself aise to everyone can relate himself with these lines i just wish ki i can get this amazing style of writing...
first two lines are great, it reflects the reality of life.
tumne itni ghari bat ko itni sadgi se likh diya keep going on
Sametate hai mushkilo se apane yaha waha tute pade hisso ko
Kaise ye bas apne choone bhar se hi phir unhe bikher deti hai
Itni sundar pakatiyan...pehli baar someone i see has written something that i is closer to my heart..
i loved it so much..superb..
I bow to u !!!
great lines....
yar samajh nahiaata tum logo ke dimag main ye sab batein aati kaha se hai...i mean itni acchi lines and thoughts.
beautifuly crafted.
keep up the good owrk goin!
@dream cather
tahnx for the complement but its nothing in front of ur amazing poems i m really nishbad by reading them.
thats ur humbleness speaking..:) thanx for honouring :)..
i really cldn't help smiling when i read ur poems..it comes so close to what i think..(as per what i perceive)...still no once can interpret the true meaning what actually the author mean many times..seldom it happens..
there has to be
some deep seated
huge... pain.. and
Bit of ... addiction..
& bit of ... madness..
without such combination,
you won't be
able to write what you
you are trying...to write..
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