Tuesday, January 09, 2007

Thokar!



Lagi pahli thokar, bikhar gaye tukdo me


Ab apna hissa khud se hi chuna nahi jata


Haste the auro par sunke unke kisse


Biti jo khud par to saya pahchana nahi jata


Apne aap ko anokha samajh bethe the hum nada


Chuta hamse wo, jo kabhi choda nahi jata


Khade rahe barso barish ke intzar me


Bhul gaye registan me badal barsa nahi karta

5 comments:

Me Thinks.. said...

I understand.. this is exactly how I feel at times, well, I used to...

mystupendoussalvation said...

Khade rahe barso barish ke intzar me
Bhul gaye registan me badal barsa nahi karta hey so sexy line.......... i love tht yeh too good Its like u know I always feel & think but dont know how to write so well u did it gal nice job hats off to u

Vicky's world said...

Good one,

specially registan main baadal barsa nahi karte..

keep it up.

Cosmos said...

Great one!! First para i thought that i was reading something Javed or Ayaz Ahmed.
In last two line you can improve some. But really Impressive

Ree said...

shit...how do u get words like those?