Barso bad jab doopahari dekhi apane aangana
Laga ab bhi aag ka gola sulagta hai
Choti-choti batooon par khil-khilati hai zindagi
Ab bhi haandi me chaval ublata hai
Chaate hai ghanghor badal dukh ke aksar
Par pyaar ka sawan ab bhi barsata hai
Gahari padi hai maa ki jhuriyaa kuch
Par chehara ab bhi chamkata hai
Salvate padti hai mathe par dooriyon se
Aansuon ka sagar ab bhi chalakta hai
Barso ho gaye hai ghar ko chode maano
Par wo ab bhi mere sath hasta hai rota hai
6 comments:
Goooooood, sai hai yar sai ja rahi hai, specially woh maa wali line, maa ki yaad aa gayee.
keep it up.
Nice one after coming from sweet home. one line touched my heart very much "Badal aur pyar ka sawan" really nice.
Great poet,
Who am I to comment on Thy Poems?
I cant even understand Thy great Language.....Anyway if it is written by Thy it is indeed Great.
....Sree...
honey have u thot of writing lyrics for our hindi films? huh? i mean, ur words bring on a lease of new life, so much better than the shit i hear nowadays...plz plz, mera suggestion seriously lo
yaar too good kuch chezein hai joh aoni maati se jode rakhti hai kuch chezeein hai joh bhulaye nahin bhulati!! hasti mitati nahin yeh zindagi pehroon ke nishan abhi tak baaki hai zameen se jude hai abhi hum bhi tum bhi, tum is post main behkhubhi se keh jaati ho too good!!!!!
aur tumhara blog padh ke hume kuch kuch hota hai!
kya likhti hai yaar...
mind blowing stuff..;)
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